A rising problem in Asia is the massive amounts of
pollution. Pollution is causing 4,000
people in China a day to die. This pollution is being caused by factories
burning coal and the mass amounts of power plants. Coal is the cause of 80% of
China’s Co2. People are buying air purifiers for their homes and their cars. In
Beijing the government has had to call 2 pollution “Red Alerts” within the past
month; one was caused by the most intense smog. In order for people to go out
on the streets they have to wear face masks. Throughout all of the bad, China
has made huge efforts and plans to put an end to this terrible pollution
problem. China is in the process of making the country have clean air. They
have intensified their pollution and environmental protection laws. China is on
its way to clean air and energy.
This picture below is not fog, but it how bad the pollution is in China.

Woah - 4000 people? Where is that information coming from and is that a confirmed number that is actually dying 100% from the pollution in the air? Also, China is a large country - where in China is this happening? Be sure to include all the necessary information for your readers so they can better connect to the topic you are trying to get people interested in.
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